Describe a time you went to a crowded place

Band 6

I would like to talk about a very crowded place I go時制の誤り：正しくは「went」 to last December, which was Balogun Market in Lagos. I went there on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma because she wanted to buy some nice clothes基本的な語彙で、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない for a family wedding. When we arrived, there were so many people that we can時制の誤り：正しくは「could」 not walk fast. Some sellers were shouting, some customers were arguing about the good price基本的な言い回し：「a fair price」のほうが正確, and motorbikes were, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉, passing in the narrow lanes between the stalls. We stopped two times to rest in a doorway, and a man carry形の誤り：正しくは「carrying」 a big bundle of cloth on his head shouted at everybody to move. I was holding my sister’s hand all the time because I was afraid we would lose each other. Most people were buying or selling, and some of them were just look around形の誤り：正しくは「looking around」 without buying anything. Honestly, I did not like it very much. It was too noisy, the air was hot, and I have時制の誤り：正しくは「had」 a headache after one hour. But my sister was happy because she find時制の誤り：正しくは「found」 the dress that she wanted, so I was happy for her too. After that we had a cold drink in a small cafe outside the market, and the quiet there felt very good基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. I think I disliked the place because I am a person who likes quiet, but I understand that a lot of people基本的な言い回しで、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない love this kind of market because, you know間を埋めるつなぎ言葉として使っている, it is full of life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a really crowded place I went to last December, Balogun Market in Lagos. I went on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma, who needed an outfit for a family wedding. By the time we arrived, the lanes were so packed that we could only shuffle along人混みの中の動きを表す、自然で的確な動詞句 with everyone else. Sellers were calling out to customers, shoppers were bargaining loudly, and every few minutes a motorbike squeeze時制の誤り：正しくは「squeezed」 past between the stalls. We stopped twice to catch our breath in a doorway, and a man carrying a huge bundle of cloth on his head shouted at everybody to make way. I kept hold of my sister’s hand because I was afraid we’d get separated. Most people were there to buy or sell something3つめの項目に答える、明確で正確な文, though some were simply wandering around and taking it all in. To be honest, I didn’t enjoy it much. It was far too noisy, the air was stifling, and I had a headache within an hour. Still, my sister was delighted対比を示す表現が、話の一貫性を保っている because she found exactly the dress she wanted, and that made the trip worthwhile. Afterwards we had a cold drink in a small cafe outside the market, and the quiet there felt wonderful. I think I disliked it mainly because I prefer quiet places, although I can understand why so many people is attracted主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「are attracted」 to a market that’s so full of energy.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a market I visited last December, Balogun Market in Lagos, which is easily the most crowded place I’ve ever been to. I went on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma, who needed an outfit for a family wedding. By the time we arrived, the lanes were so packed that all we could do was let the crowd carry us along人混みの中の動きを表す、慣用的で鮮やかな表現. Sellers were calling out to passers-by, shoppers were haggling at the top of their voices, and every few minutes a motorbike squeezed through the gaps between the stalls. We had to stop twice to catch our breath in a doorway, and a man balancing a huge bundle of cloth on his head barked at everybody to make way. I kept hold of my sister’s hand for fear of getting separated. Although most people were simply there to buy or sell, others were wandering about and soaking it all in譲歩を表す構文を、正確かつ自然に使っている. To be honest, I didn’t enjoy it. The noise was relentless, the air was stifling, and within an hour I had a pounding headache. That saidバランスのとれた見方を導く、話の流れを示す表現, my sister was delighted to find exactly the dress she’d been looking for, which made the trip worthwhile. Afterwards we had a cold drink at a small cafe outside the market, and the sudden quiet felt like a luxury. I think I disliked it because I crave quiet的確で自然な動詞選び, but I can see why so many people are drawn to a place that is so full of energy.