Describe a story or book with animals in it

Band 6

I would like to talk about a book called Animal Farm, which was written by George Orwell. I have read시제 오류: 이미 지나간 시점이므로 올바른 형태는 “read” it two years ago in Tbilisi, because my English teacher said us동사 구문 오류: 올바른 형태는 “told us” 또는 “asked us” to read it for our literature class. The story is about a farm where the animals decides주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “decide” to send away the farmer and run the farm by themselves. There are pigs, horses, sheep and dogs in it. The sheep say the same short sentences all the time, and the dogs help the pigs to keep control. I liked this because the animals have different characters, like real people. At the beginning everything is very good기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, but slowly the pigs become the new leaders and they start to act like the farmer. The horse Boxer works very hard for everybody, and the pigs do not treat him fair형용사·부사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “fairly” at the end. Er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, I almost cried when I read this part. In my opinion it is a very good book because it looks like a simple story for children, but it is really about people who have power and how they can change. It is also short, so it was more easy비교급 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “easier” than I expected. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, I think it is a story that everybody should read, young people and also adults, because the message is still very important기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 today. After I finished it, my friends and I had a long discussion in the class, and the teacher was very pleased.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a book called Animal Farm, which was written by George Orwell. I read it two years ago in Tbilisi, because my English teacher asked us to read it for our literature class. The story is set on a farm where the animals decide to chase out the farmer and run things themselves. There are pigs, horses, sheep and dogs in it. The sheep repeat the same slogans all the time, and the dogs help the pigs to keep control. I liked how each kind of animal has its own personality, just like people we know. At first everything goes well, but gradually the pigs become the new rulers and start behaving like the farmer. Boxer, the horse, works tirelessly for everyone, and the way the pigs treat him at the end주어로 쓴 명사구를 안정적으로 구사 is really upsetting; I almost cried when I read that part. In my opinion, it’s an excellent book because it looks like a simple children’s story, but it’s actually an allegory about power정확한 주제 어휘 and how it can change people. It’s also quite short, so it was more easy비교급 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “easier” to finish than I expected. What I liked most의견을 알리는 분명한 안내 표현 was that the language is plain, yet the message is serious, and I think everybody should read it, young people and adults alike, because it’s still highly relevant today자연스러운 콜로케이션. After I finished it, my classmates and I had a long discussion in class, and our teacher was clearly pleased that we had noticed so much.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a book called Animal Farm, by George Orwell. I read it two years ago in Tbilisi, because my English teacher asked us to read it for our literature class. The story is set on a farm where the animals decide to drive out the farmer and run things for themselves. There are pigs, horses, sheep and dogs, and at first everything goes well, but gradually the pigs become the new rulers and start behaving just like the farmer they replaced. The sheep chant the same slogans over and over, while the dogs enforce the pigs’ wishes, and I enjoyed how each kind of animal stands for a different type of person. Boxer, the horse, works tirelessly for everyone, and the way he is treated by the pigs in the end명사구 안에서 수동 구조를 정확하게 사용 genuinely upset me; I almost cried. In my opinion, it’s an excellent book, because what looks like a simple children’s story is really an allegory about how power can corrupt정확하고 관용적인 주제 어휘. It’s also short and written in plain language, so it was far easier to finish than I expected, yet the message is serious. If I had to pick one thing that stayed with me개인적인 성찰을 이끄는 자연스러운 담화 표지, it would be how quickly the other animals stopped questioning what they were told. I’d urge everybody to read it, young people and adults alike, because it remains strikingly relevant정확하고 자연스러운 표현 today. When we finished it, my classmates and I had a lively discussion in class, and our teacher was delighted that we had noticed so much beneath the surface.