Describe a person you know who is very organised

Band 6

I would like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who liveLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “lives” in Kisumu. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and she is also studying for a master’s degree in the evenings, so her days are, erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể, very busy. To stay organised she uses a paper planner and a calendar on her phone, and every night she prepareLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “prepares” her bag and her clothes for the next day. On Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and plans the whole week. She also puts reminders on her phone for small things like paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this when our family plans something together. Last year our mother turned sixty, and Achieng makeLỗi thì: phải là “made” one page with the guest list, the food and the transport, so everything goLỗi thì: phải là “went” well on the day. I also notice it when she studies, because her notes isLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “are” in different colours and she knows what she will read on each day. Sometimes her friends laugh at her because she is always early for everything, but she don’t mindLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “doesn’t mind”. Being organised is important to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a medicine can be very badTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource for a patient. It also helps her to not have stressCách nói cơ bản và thiếu tự nhiên; một cụm động từ chính xác như “avoid panicking” sẽ được điểm cao hơn when she is tired. Once I asked her how she does it, and she said that a plan takes ten minutes but it saves her many hours. You knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, I am not like her, I always do things at the last timeCách nói thiếu tự nhiên; “at the last minute” là cách nói thông thường, so I think she is a very goodTính từ cơ bản; “admirable” sẽ cho thấy độ đa dạng hơn example for me.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who lives in Kisumu. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and she’s also studying for a master’s degree in the evenings, so her days are extremely busy. To stay organised she uses a paper planner and a calendar on her phone, and every night she packs her bag and lays out her clothes for the next day. On Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and plans the whole week. She also sets reminders on her phone for small things like paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this most when our family organises something together. Last year our mother turned sixty, and Achieng put the guest list, the food and the transport on one page, so everything went smoothly on the dayMệnh đề kết quả gắn chính xác với hành động trước đó. I also see it in the way she studies: her notes are colour-coded and she knows exactly what she’ll revise on every dayLỗi giới từ: phải là “revise each day” hoặc “on each day”. Her friends sometimes tease her for always arriving early, but she doesn’t mind. Being organised matters to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a doseCụm danh từ chính xác, đúng chủ đề could seriously harm a patient. It also means she hardly ever has to panicLiên kết tự nhiên quay lại lý do when she’s tired. When I asked her how she does it, she said that a plan takes ten minutes but saves her hours. Honestly, I’m not like her, I usually leave things until the last minute, so she’s a real example for me of how much calmer life can be.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who lives in Kisumu and is easily the most organised person I know. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and is studying part time for a master’s degree, so her days are tightly packed. To keep on top of everything she uses a paper planner and a phone calendar, and every night she packs her bag and lays out her clothes for the following day. Every Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and maps out the whole week. She even sets phone reminders for small things such as paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this most whenever the family organises something together. When our mother turned sixty, Achieng put the guest list, the food and the transport on a single page, and nothing went wrong on the day, whereas I would probably have forgotten the cakeMệnh đề đối lập kèm câu điều kiện, thêm cá tính cho bài nói. I also see it in the way she studies: her notes are colour-coded and she knows exactly what she’ll revise each day. Her friends tease her for turning up early everywhereCụm động từ thân mật, tự nhiên, nghĩa chính xác, yet she takes it as a compliment. Being organised matters to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a doseCụm danh từ chính xác, đúng chủ đề could seriously harm a patient, and being methodical is part of being responsibleMối liên hệ trừu tượng giữa thói quen và tính cách. It also spares her the panic that comes from rushingLời giải thích tự nhiên, linh hoạt về lợi ích cá nhân. When I once asked her how she does it, she laughed and said that a plan takes ten minutes but saves hours. Honestly, I find it both inspiring and slightly intimidating, and I’m slowly borrowing a few of her habits.