Describe a person you know who is very organised

Band 6

I would like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who live주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “lives” in Kisumu. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and she is also studying for a master’s degree in the evenings, so her days are, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, very busy. To stay organised she uses a paper planner and a calendar on her phone, and every night she prepare주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “prepares” her bag and her clothes for the next day. On Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and plans the whole week. She also puts reminders on her phone for small things like paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this when our family plans something together. Last year our mother turned sixty, and Achieng make시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “made” one page with the guest list, the food and the transport, so everything go시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “went” well on the day. I also notice it when she studies, because her notes is주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “are” in different colours and she knows what she will read on each day. Sometimes her friends laugh at her because she is always early for everything, but she don’t mind주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “doesn’t mind”. Being organised is important to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a medicine can be very bad기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 for a patient. It also helps her to not have stress기본적이고 부자연스러운 표현, “avoid panicking” 같은 정확한 동사구를 쓰면 더 높은 점수를 받음 when she is tired. Once I asked her how she does it, and she said that a plan takes ten minutes but it saves her many hours. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, I am not like her, I always do things at the last time부자연스러운 표현: 보통은 “at the last minute”라고 함, so I think she is a very good기본적인 형용사, “admirable”을 쓰면 폭을 더 보여 줌 example for me.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who lives in Kisumu. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and she’s also studying for a master’s degree in the evenings, so her days are extremely busy. To stay organised she uses a paper planner and a calendar on her phone, and every night she packs her bag and lays out her clothes for the next day. On Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and plans the whole week. She also sets reminders on her phone for small things like paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this most when our family organises something together. Last year our mother turned sixty, and Achieng put the guest list, the food and the transport on one page, so everything went smoothly on the day앞의 행동과 정확하게 이어진 결과절. I also see it in the way she studies: her notes are colour-coded and she knows exactly what she’ll revise on every day전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “revise each day” 또는 “on each day”. Her friends sometimes tease her for always arriving early, but she doesn’t mind. Being organised matters to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a dose주제에 맞는 정확한 명사구 could seriously harm a patient. It also means she hardly ever has to panic이유로 자연스럽게 되돌아가는 연결 표현 when she’s tired. When I asked her how she does it, she said that a plan takes ten minutes but saves her hours. Honestly, I’m not like her, I usually leave things until the last minute, so she’s a real example for me of how much calmer life can be.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my older sister Achieng, who lives in Kisumu and is easily the most organised person I know. She works as a pharmacist in a hospital and is studying part time for a master’s degree, so her days are tightly packed. To keep on top of everything she uses a paper planner and a phone calendar, and every night she packs her bag and lays out her clothes for the following day. Every Sunday evening she sits down for ten minutes and maps out the whole week. She even sets phone reminders for small things such as paying bills or calling our parents. I notice this most whenever the family organises something together. When our mother turned sixty, Achieng put the guest list, the food and the transport on a single page, and nothing went wrong on the day, whereas I would probably have forgotten the cake성격을 드러내는 조건문이 붙은 대조절. I also see it in the way she studies: her notes are colour-coded and she knows exactly what she’ll revise each day. Her friends tease her for turning up early everywhere정확한 뜻을 가진 자연스러운 구어체 구동사, yet she takes it as a compliment. Being organised matters to her because in a pharmacy a small mistake with a dose주제에 맞는 정확한 명사구 could seriously harm a patient, and being methodical is part of being responsible습관과 성격을 잇는 추상적인 연결. It also spares her the panic that comes from rushing개인적인 이점을 설명하는 자연스럽고 융통성 있는 표현. When I once asked her how she does it, she laughed and said that a plan takes ten minutes but saves hours. Honestly, I find it both inspiring and slightly intimidating, and I’m slowly borrowing a few of her habits.