Describe a person who is famous in your local area

Band 6

I would like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who is famous in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She has a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she haveLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “has” a short programme on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened the restaurant twenty years ago, after she workLỗi thì: phải là “worked” in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. People like her for some reasons. First, her food is very tastyTừ vựng cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource and it tasteLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “tastes” like the dishes our grandmothers made. Second, she is not proud, you knowCụm từ đệm dùng để ngập ngừng, she comes out of the kitchen and says hello to every customer. I remember last year my family goLỗi thì: phải là “went” there for my mother’s birthday, and she rememberLỗi thì: phải là “remembered” my grandmother’s name, which surprised us a lot. There is also a queue outside the restaurant at lunch, and some tourists even come from Lima to try her good soupTính từ mơ hồ; một từ chính xác hơn sẽ làm câu hay hơn. She also teaches young people from the neighbourhood to cook, erTừ ngập ngừng tự nhiên, từ đệm không đáng kể, so they can find a job. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper wrote about her, and now more people know her name. When I eat her food, I feel connected with my family and my history. I feel proud that she is from my city, and I am respectingĐộng từ chỉ trạng thái bị dùng ở dạng tiếp diễn: phải là “respect” her because she keeps our traditions alive. She is a very goodTính từ cơ bản, hạn chế Lexical Resource person and I would like to learn from her one day.

Band 7

I’d like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who’s a household name in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She runs a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she has a short slot on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened the restaurant twenty years ago, after working in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. There are several reasons why people are so fond of her. First, her food tastes exactly like the dishes our grandmothers used to makeDùng “used to” tự nhiên cho thói quen trong quá khứ. Second, she’s completely down to earthCollocation phổ biến, đặt đúng chỗ: she comes out of the kitchen to greet every customer. Last year my family went there for my mother’s birthday, and she remembered my grandmother’s name, which took us all by surpriseCách diễn đạt mang tính thành ngữ với thì đúng. There’s often a queue outside at lunchtime, and some tourists even travel from Lima just to try her soup. She also trains young people from the neighbourhood, so they can find work in kitchens. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper wrote a piece about her, so her name is now spreading beyond the city. When I eat her food, I feel connected to my family and to our history. I feel proud that she comes from my city, and I respect her because she keeps our traditions alive. It give meLỗi hoà hợp chủ ngữ – động từ: phải là “It gives me” the feeling that a small business can matter to a whole community, and I’d love to learn from her one day.

Band 8

I’d like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who is something of a household name in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She runs a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she has a short slot on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened it twenty years ago, having learned the trade in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. There are several reasons why people are so fond of her. For one thing, her food tastes just like the dishes our grandmothers used to make. For another, she is so unassuming that she comes out of the kitchen to greet every customerMệnh đề kết quả cho thấy khả năng kiểm soát cấu trúc phức tạp. Last year my family went there for my mother’s birthday, and she remembered my grandmother’s name, which took us all by surpriseCách diễn đạt mang tính thành ngữ, dùng tự nhiên. There’s often a queue outside at lunchtime, and some tourists even travel from Lima for a bowl of her soup. She also trains young people from the neighbourhood, which gives them a foot in the door of local kitchensMệnh đề quan hệ không xác định kèm một thành ngữ. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper profiled her, and her name is now travelling well beyond the city. Every time I eat her food, I feel connected to my family and to a shared history. I feel proud that she comes from my city, and I admire her because she keeps our traditions alive. What strikes me most, I think,Discourse marker dẫn vào một ý kiến đã cân nhắc is that she has shown how a small business can become part of a whole community’s identity, and I’d love to learn from her one day.