Describe a person who is famous in your local area

Band 6

I would like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who is famous in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She has a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she have주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “has” a short programme on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened the restaurant twenty years ago, after she work시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “worked” in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. People like her for some reasons. First, her food is very tasty기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 and it taste주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “tastes” like the dishes our grandmothers made. Second, she is not proud, you know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, she comes out of the kitchen and says hello to every customer. I remember last year my family go시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “went” there for my mother’s birthday, and she remember시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “remembered” my grandmother’s name, which surprised us a lot. There is also a queue outside the restaurant at lunch, and some tourists even come from Lima to try her good soup모호한 형용사, 더 정확한 단어를 쓰면 문장이 나아짐. She also teaches young people from the neighbourhood to cook, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, so they can find a job. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper wrote about her, and now more people know her name. When I eat her food, I feel connected with my family and my history. I feel proud that she is from my city, and I am respecting상태 동사를 진행형으로 쓴 오류: 올바른 형태는 “respect” her because she keeps our traditions alive. She is a very good기본적인 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 person and I would like to learn from her one day.

Band 7

I’d like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who’s a household name in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She runs a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she has a short slot on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened the restaurant twenty years ago, after working in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. There are several reasons why people are so fond of her. First, her food tastes exactly like the dishes our grandmothers used to make과거의 습관을 나타내는 “used to”를 자연스럽게 사용. Second, she’s completely down to earth흔한 콜로케이션을 자연스러운 자리에 사용: she comes out of the kitchen to greet every customer. Last year my family went there for my mother’s birthday, and she remembered my grandmother’s name, which took us all by surprise알맞은 시제로 쓴 관용 표현. There’s often a queue outside at lunchtime, and some tourists even travel from Lima just to try her soup. She also trains young people from the neighbourhood, so they can find work in kitchens. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper wrote a piece about her, so her name is now spreading beyond the city. When I eat her food, I feel connected to my family and to our history. I feel proud that she comes from my city, and I respect her because she keeps our traditions alive. It give me주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “It gives me” the feeling that a small business can matter to a whole community, and I’d love to learn from her one day.

Band 8

I’d like to describe Lucia Mamani, a cook who is something of a household name in Arequipa, the city in southern Peru where I live. She runs a small traditional restaurant near my district, and every Sunday she has a short slot on the local radio, where she explains old recipes from our region. She opened it twenty years ago, having learned the trade in her aunt’s kitchen as a girl. There are several reasons why people are so fond of her. For one thing, her food tastes just like the dishes our grandmothers used to make. For another, she is so unassuming that she comes out of the kitchen to greet every customer복잡한 구조를 다루는 능력을 보여 주는 결과절. Last year my family went there for my mother’s birthday, and she remembered my grandmother’s name, which took us all by surprise관용 표현을 자연스럽게 사용. There’s often a queue outside at lunchtime, and some tourists even travel from Lima for a bowl of her soup. She also trains young people from the neighbourhood, which gives them a foot in the door of local kitchens관용 표현이 붙은 계속적 용법의 관계절. Last month a journalist from a national newspaper profiled her, and her name is now travelling well beyond the city. Every time I eat her food, I feel connected to my family and to a shared history. I feel proud that she comes from my city, and I admire her because she keeps our traditions alive. What strikes me most, I think,신중한 의견을 이끄는 담화 표지 is that she has shown how a small business can become part of a whole community’s identity, and I’d love to learn from her one day.