Describe an older person you admire

Band 6

I would like to talk about Mrs Kamala Shrestha, an elderly neighbour of mine in Kathmandu. She is seventy-eight years old and she live주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “lives” on the ground floor of our building. I know her since시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “I have known her since” I was seven, when my family moved there. She was a primary school teacher for nearly forty years, and, you know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, she still reads a newspaper every single day. Many of her old students still visits주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “visit” her, and some of them are now doctors. On Saturday mornings we walk together to a small garden near the temple, and after that we drink milk tea and talk. She tells me stories about her old students and about the city when it was very quiet기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and she always asks about my plans. Her flat is full of books and plants, and the door is always open for people who want to talk. I admire her because her husband died ten years ago, but she do not조동사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “did not” become sad and angry. Instead she joined a women’s group and start시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “started” a vegetable garden on the roof. When I am stressed about my exams, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, she tells me to take one step at a time. I feel very grateful when I am with her, and I feel a little proud that she is my friend. She never gives me orders, she just listens and then she asks me a good question기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and that helps me to think. I hope that when I will be old“when” 뒤의 시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “when I am old” I can be as kind and as curious as she is. She is a very good기본적인 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 example for me.

Band 7

I’d like to describe Mrs Kamala Shrestha, an elderly neighbour of mine in Kathmandu. She’s seventy-eight and lives on the ground floor of our building, and I’ve known her since I was seven, when my family moved in. She was a primary school teacher for nearly forty years, and she still reads a newspaper from cover to cover every day. Many of her former pupils still drop in to see her, and a few of them have become doctors and engineers. On Saturday mornings we stroll정확한 동사 선택 to a small garden near the temple, then sit down with milk tea and talk. She tells me stories about her former pupils and about the city when it was far quieter than it is now시간절이 붙은 비교급을 정확하게 사용, and she never forgets to ask about my plans. Her flat is crammed with books and plants, and the door is always open to anyone who wants a chat. What I admire most is how she handled losing her husband ten years ago: she didn’t turn bitter, she threw herself into관용적인 구동사를 자연스럽게 사용 a local women’s group and started a vegetable garden on the roof. Whenever I’m stressed out자연스러운 구어체 구동사 형용사 about my exams, she reminds me to take things one step at a time. I feel genuinely grateful to know her, and a little proud that she consider주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “considers” me a friend. What I value is that she never gives orders; she simply listens and then asks the right question, which usually helps me work out what I think. I hope that when I’m her age I’ll be as kind and as curious about other people as she is.

Band 8

I’d like to describe Mrs Kamala Shrestha, an elderly neighbour of mine in Kathmandu. She’s seventy-eight and lives on the ground floor of our building, and I’ve known her since I was seven, when my family moved in. She taught at a primary school for nearly forty years, and she still reads the newspaper from cover to cover every morning. Many of her former pupils still drop in, and a few of them have since become doctors and engineers, which she mentions with quiet pride. On Saturdays we amble느긋한 걷기를 나타내는 정확하고 자연스러운 동사 over to a small garden near the temple and settle down with milk tea, and she tells me about her former pupils and about a city that was a good deal quieter than the one I know수식어가 붙은 비교급을 자연스럽고 안정적으로 사용. She never fails to ask about my plans, either. Her flat is crammed with books and plants, and her door is open to anyone who fancies a chat. What I admire most is how she coped with losing her husband ten years ago: rather than withdrawing, she threw herself into관용적인 구동사를 자연스럽게 사용 a local women’s group and started a vegetable garden on the roof. Whenever exams have me climbing the walls구어적이지만 알맞은 관용 표현, she reminds me to take things one step at a time, and somehow it works. She never issues instructions; she listens, then asks precisely the question that helps me untangle my own thoughts. I feel deeply grateful to know her, and a little proud that she considers me a friend. If I’m honest개인적인 성찰을 이끄는 담화 표지, I hope that when I reach her age I’ll be every bit as kind and curious as she is강조어가 붙은 동등 비교 구문, because she has shown me that growing old need not mean growing smaller.