Describe a time you went to a crowded place

Band 6

I would like to talk about a very crowded place I go시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “went” to last December, which was Balogun Market in Lagos. I went there on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma because she wanted to buy some nice clothes모호한 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 for a family wedding. When we arrived, there were so many people that we can시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “could” not walk fast. Some sellers were shouting, some customers were arguing about the good price기본적인 표현: “a fair price”가 더 정확함, and motorbikes were, er머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말, passing in the narrow lanes between the stalls. We stopped two times to rest in a doorway, and a man carry형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “carrying” a big bundle of cloth on his head shouted at everybody to move. I was holding my sister’s hand all the time because I was afraid we would lose each other. Most people were buying or selling, and some of them were just look around형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “looking around” without buying anything. Honestly, I did not like it very much. It was too noisy, the air was hot, and I have시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “had” a headache after one hour. But my sister was happy because she find시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “found” the dress that she wanted, so I was happy for her too. After that we had a cold drink in a small cafe outside the market, and the quiet there felt very good기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. I think I disliked the place because I am a person who likes quiet, but I understand that a lot of people기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 love this kind of market because, you know머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말로 쓰임, it is full of life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a really crowded place I went to last December, Balogun Market in Lagos. I went on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma, who needed an outfit for a family wedding. By the time we arrived, the lanes were so packed that we could only shuffle along군중 속에서 움직이는 모습을 나타내는 자연스럽고 정확한 동사구 with everyone else. Sellers were calling out to customers, shoppers were bargaining loudly, and every few minutes a motorbike squeeze시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “squeezed” past between the stalls. We stopped twice to catch our breath in a doorway, and a man carrying a huge bundle of cloth on his head shouted at everybody to make way. I kept hold of my sister’s hand because I was afraid we’d get separated. Most people were there to buy or sell something세 번째 항목에 답하는 분명하고 정확한 문장, though some were simply wandering around and taking it all in. To be honest, I didn’t enjoy it much. It was far too noisy, the air was stifling, and I had a headache within an hour. Still, my sister was delighted대조 표지가 이야기의 일관성을 유지함 because she found exactly the dress she wanted, and that made the trip worthwhile. Afterwards we had a cold drink in a small cafe outside the market, and the quiet there felt wonderful. I think I disliked it mainly because I prefer quiet places, although I can understand why so many people is attracted수 일치 오류: 올바른 형태는 “are attracted” to a market that’s so full of energy.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a market I visited last December, Balogun Market in Lagos, which is easily the most crowded place I’ve ever been to. I went on a Saturday morning with my younger sister Chidinma, who needed an outfit for a family wedding. By the time we arrived, the lanes were so packed that all we could do was let the crowd carry us along군중 속에서 움직이는 모습을 나타내는 관용적이고 생생한 표현. Sellers were calling out to passers-by, shoppers were haggling at the top of their voices, and every few minutes a motorbike squeezed through the gaps between the stalls. We had to stop twice to catch our breath in a doorway, and a man balancing a huge bundle of cloth on his head barked at everybody to make way. I kept hold of my sister’s hand for fear of getting separated. Although most people were simply there to buy or sell, others were wandering about and soaking it all in양보 구문을 정확하고 자연스럽게 사용. To be honest, I didn’t enjoy it. The noise was relentless, the air was stifling, and within an hour I had a pounding headache. That said균형 잡힌 관점을 이끄는 담화 표지, my sister was delighted to find exactly the dress she’d been looking for, which made the trip worthwhile. Afterwards we had a cold drink at a small cafe outside the market, and the sudden quiet felt like a luxury. I think I disliked it because I crave quiet정확하고 자연스러운 동사 선택, but I can see why so many people are drawn to a place that is so full of energy.