Describe a happy person you know

Band 6

I would like to talk about my aunt Amina, who is the younger sister of my mother. She lives in Mombasa in Kenya, and she has a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago and now three women works主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「work」 there with her. She is very happy person冠詞の誤り：正しくは「a very happy person」, I think, and everybody who know主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「knows」 her says the same. She is warm and talkative, and she is also very generous. She laugh主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「laughs」 loudly, and the laugh is so big that people in the street turn their heads, you know間を埋めるつなぎ言葉として使っている. While she is sewing, she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins is dancing主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「are dancing」 around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and she often bring主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「brings」 snacks for the neighbours. If somebody has a problem she always stops her work to listen, and she never says that she is too busy. I think she is happy because she is content with what she has. She does not compare herself with other people, er自然な間、気にならないつなぎ言葉, and she spends time with her family every day. She also says thank you for small things, like a good meal or good weather基本的な語彙で、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and the customers go home smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I am with her I feeled動詞の形の誤り：正しくは「feel」 relaxed and I forget my worries. She is a very good基本的な形容詞で、Lexical Resourceの評価が伸びない example of a happy person.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and now three women work there with her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I know関係詞節を伴う最上級を自然に使っている, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and very generous. She has a big laugh, and it’s so loud that people in the street turn their heads. While she’s sewing she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins dances主語と動詞の不一致：正しくは「dance」 around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and often brings snacks for the neighbours. If someone has a problem she’ll stop whatever she’s doing to listen, and she never says she’s too busy. I think she’s happy because she’s content with what she has名詞節の「what」節を正確に使っている. She doesn’t compare herself with other people, and she spends time with her family every day. She also counts her blessings慣用表現を自然に使っている, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I’m with her I feel relaxed and I forget my worries, which I think says a lot個人的なコメントを加える、つなぎの表現. She really is a living example of what a positive outlook can do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and three women now work alongside her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I know関係詞節を伴う最上級を自然に使っている, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and exceptionally generous. Her laugh is so loud that people in the street turn their heads, and while she’s sewing she sings old songs, so my cousins often end up dancing around the shop with her「end up」のあとの分詞節を自然に使っている. She greets every customer by name and regularly brings snacks round for the neighbours. If someone is struggling she’ll put down her scissors to listen, and she has never once said she was too busy. As for why she’s happy, I think it comes down to the fact that she’s content with what she has. She never compares herself with other people, she spends time with her family every day, and she counts her blessings慣用表現を自然に使っている, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she cracks jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. Honestly,個人的な振り返りを導くディスコースマーカー when I’m with her I feel relaxed and my worries seem to melt away自然に使われた、慣用的な句動詞. She is living proof of how much a positive outlook can change an ordinary day複雑な補語を伴う、抽象的な名詞句.