Describe a happy person you know

Band 6

I would like to talk about my aunt Amina, who is the younger sister of my mother. She lives in Mombasa in Kenya, and she has a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago and now three women worksประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “work” there with her. She is very happy personขาดคำนำหน้านาม ต้องเป็น “a very happy person”, I think, and everybody who knowประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “knows” her says the same. She is warm and talkative, and she is also very generous. She laughประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “laughs” loudly, and the laugh is so big that people in the street turn their heads, you knowใช้วลีเติมเป็นตัวหยุดคิด. While she is sewing, she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins is dancingประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “are dancing” around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and she often bringประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “brings” snacks for the neighbours. If somebody has a problem she always stops her work to listen, and she never says that she is too busy. I think she is happy because she is content with what she has. She does not compare herself with other people, erหยุดคิดอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ คำเติมไม่รบกวน, and she spends time with her family every day. She also says thank you for small things, like a good meal or good weatherคำศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and the customers go home smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I am with her I feeledใช้รูปกริยาผิด ต้องเป็น “feel” relaxed and I forget my worries. She is a very goodคำคุณศัพท์พื้นฐาน จำกัดคะแนน Lexical Resource example of a happy person.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and now three women work there with her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I knowsuperlative ที่ใช้กับ relative clause ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and very generous. She has a big laugh, and it’s so loud that people in the street turn their heads. While she’s sewing she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins dancesประธานกับกริยาไม่สอดคล้องกัน ต้องเป็น “dance” around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and often brings snacks for the neighbours. If someone has a problem she’ll stop whatever she’s doing to listen, and she never says she’s too busy. I think she’s happy because she’s content with what she hasnominal “what” clause ใช้ได้ถูกต้อง. She doesn’t compare herself with other people, and she spends time with her family every day. She also counts her blessingsสำนวนที่ใช้ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I’m with her I feel relaxed and I forget my worries, which I think says a lotวลีเชื่อมที่เพิ่มความเห็นส่วนตัว. She really is a living example of what a positive outlook can do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and three women now work alongside her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I knowsuperlative ที่ใช้กับ relative clause ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and exceptionally generous. Her laugh is so loud that people in the street turn their heads, and while she’s sewing she sings old songs, so my cousins often end up dancing around the shop with herparticiple clause หลัง “end up” ใช้ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ. She greets every customer by name and regularly brings snacks round for the neighbours. If someone is struggling she’ll put down her scissors to listen, and she has never once said she was too busy. As for why she’s happy, I think it comes down to the fact that she’s content with what she has. She never compares herself with other people, she spends time with her family every day, and she counts her blessingsสำนวนที่ใช้ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she cracks jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. Honestly,discourse marker นำเข้าสู่การสะท้อนความคิดส่วนตัว when I’m with her I feel relaxed and my worries seem to melt awayphrasal verb แบบสำนวนที่ใช้ได้เป็นธรรมชาติ. She is living proof of how much a positive outlook can change an ordinary dayabstract noun phrase ที่มีส่วนเติมเต็มซับซ้อน.