Describe a happy person you know

Band 6

I would like to talk about my aunt Amina, who is the younger sister of my mother. She lives in Mombasa in Kenya, and she has a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago and now three women worksБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «work» болуы керек there with her. She is very happy personАртикль жоқ: «a very happy person» болуы керек, I think, and everybody who knowБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «knows» болуы керек her says the same. She is warm and talkative, and she is also very generous. She laughБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «laughs» болуы керек loudly, and the laugh is so big that people in the street turn their heads, you knowКідіріс белгісі ретінде қолданылған толтырғыш тіркес. While she is sewing, she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins is dancingҚиыспау қатесі: «are dancing» болуы керек around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and she often bringБастауыш пен баяндауыштың қиыспауы: «brings» болуы керек snacks for the neighbours. If somebody has a problem she always stops her work to listen, and she never says that she is too busy. I think she is happy because she is content with what she has. She does not compare herself with other people, erТабиғи кідіріс, елеусіз толтырғыш сөз, and she spends time with her family every day. She also says thank you for small things, like a good meal or good weatherҚарапайым сөздік қор; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and the customers go home smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I am with her I feeledЕтістік формасының қатесі: «feel» болуы керек relaxed and I forget my worries. She is a very goodҚарапайым сын есім; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді example of a happy person.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and now three women work there with her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I knowRelative clause қосылған табиғи superlative, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and very generous. She has a big laugh, and it’s so loud that people in the street turn their heads. While she’s sewing she sings old songs, and sometimes my cousins dancesҚиыспау қатесі: «dance» болуы керек around the shop with her. She greets every customer by name and often brings snacks for the neighbours. If someone has a problem she’ll stop whatever she’s doing to listen, and she never says she’s too busy. I think she’s happy because she’s content with what she has«what» clause зат есім қызметінде дәл қолданылған. She doesn’t compare herself with other people, and she spends time with her family every day. She also counts her blessingsТабиғи қолданылған идиомалық өрнек, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she tells jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. When I’m with her I feel relaxed and I forget my worries, which I think says a lotЖеке пікір қосатын байланыстырушы тіркес. She really is a living example of what a positive outlook can do.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my aunt Amina, my mother’s younger sister. She lives in Mombasa, in Kenya, and she runs a small tailoring shop near the old town. She opened it fifteen years ago, and three women now work alongside her. She’s one of the most cheerful people I knowRelative clause қосылған табиғи superlative, and everybody who meets her says the same. She’s warm, talkative and exceptionally generous. Her laugh is so loud that people in the street turn their heads, and while she’s sewing she sings old songs, so my cousins often end up dancing around the shop with her«end up» кейін participle clause табиғи қолданылған. She greets every customer by name and regularly brings snacks round for the neighbours. If someone is struggling she’ll put down her scissors to listen, and she has never once said she was too busy. As for why she’s happy, I think it comes down to the fact that she’s content with what she has. She never compares herself with other people, she spends time with her family every day, and she counts her blessingsТабиғи қолданылған идиомалық өрнек, thanking people for small things such as a good meal or a cool breeze from the sea. Even on difficult days she cracks jokes, and customers leave the shop smiling. The neighbours say that the street feels quiet when she travels. Honestly,Жеке ой-толғауды бастайтын discourse marker when I’m with her I feel relaxed and my worries seem to melt awayТабиғи қолданылған идиомалық phrasal verb. She is living proof of how much a positive outlook can change an ordinary dayКүрделі толықтауышы бар дерексіз зат есім тіркесі.