Describe a person who is good at making things by hand

Band 6

I would like to talk about my neighbour, Seu Antonio, who is very good at making things from wood. He is a retired carpenter and he liveОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «lives» next door to my family in Curitiba, in Brazil. I know him sinceОшибка времени: должно быть «have known him since» I was a small child, because I use toОшибка формы: должно быть «used to» sit outside his workshop and watch him work. He makes wooden chairs, small toys for the children in our street, and once he made a bookshelf for my mother, which we still have in our living room. He learned the work from his father when he was a teenager, and last Christmas he made a small wooden train for my little brother, who still sleeps with it. What I remember is the smell of the wood and the sound of his tools, and sometimes he let me hold the sandpaper, and he was, erЕстественная заминка, лёгкое слово-паразит, always very careful with every piece. He don’t useОшибка во вспомогательном глаголе: должно быть «doesn’t use» machines for the small parts, and he sands each toy until it is very smoothПростая лексика; ограничивает Lexical Resource. I admire this skill for some reasons. First, it needs a lot of patience, and I am not a patient person, so I think it is very difficultПростая лексика; ограничивает Lexical Resource. Second, the things he makes isОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «are» strong and they last for many years, not like cheap things from a big shop. You knowФраза-паразит, используемая как заминка, he also teaches the children to make a small boat, and I think this is a good way to keep the old skill alive. Maybe one day I will learn it from him too.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Seu Antonio, who’s extremely good at making things from wood. He’s a retired carpenter and he lives next door to my family in Curitiba, in Brazil. I’ve known him since I was a small child, because I used to sit outside his workshop and watch him work«Used to» для повторяющейся привычки в прошлом употреблено правильно. He makes wooden chairs, small toys for the children in our street, and once he built a bookshelf for my mother, which we still have in our living room. He learned the work from his father when he was a teenager, and last Christmas he made a small wooden train for my little brother, who still sleeps with it. What I remember most is the smell of the wood and the sound of his tools, and sometimes he let me hold the sandpaper, and he was always meticulous about every pieceТочное прилагательное с естественным предлогом. He doesn’t use machines for the small parts, and he sands each toy until it’s smooth like silkОшибка в предлоге: должно быть «smooth as silk». I admire this skill for a few reasons. Firstly, it takes enormous patience, which I am lackingНеестественная формулировка: «I lack» или «I don’t have» более идиоматично. Secondly, what he makes is built to lastЕстественное устойчивое выражение, unlike the cheap things you find in a big shop. What’s moreСвязующая фраза естественно добавляет мысль, he teaches the local children to make a small boat, and I think that’s a good way of keeping the old skill alive. I’m hoping to learn it from him one day.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my neighbour, Seu Antonio, who’s remarkably good at making things from wood. He’s a retired carpenter and lives next door to my family in Curitiba, in Brazil. I’ve known him since I was small, because I used to sit outside his workshop for hours, watching him work. He makes wooden chairs and small toys for the children in our street, and he once built a bookshelf for my mother that still stands in our living room. He learned the work from his father when he was a teenager, and last Christmas he made a small wooden train for my little brother, who still sleeps with it. What I remember most is the smell of fresh wood and the sound of his tools, and sometimes he let me hold the sandpaper, and he was always meticulous about every pieceТочное прилагательное с естественным предлогом. He doesn’t use machines for the delicate parts, and he sands each toy until it’s smooth as silkЕстественное сравнение, употреблённое точно. I admire the skill for several reasons. Firstly, it demands a kind of patience that I have yet to developЕстественная конструкция для того, чего ещё не достигнуто. Secondly, what he makes is built to lastЕстественное устойчивое выражение, whereas the things you buy in a big shop tend to wear out. Above all, he doesn’t keep the knowledge to himselfОтрицание с возвратным местоимением, употреблённое естественно: he teaches local children to make a small boat, which strikes me as the best way of keeping an old craft alive. I’m hoping to learn it from him one day.