Describe a piece of local news that people were interested in

Band 6

I would like to talk about a piece of local news from my city, Kumasi, in Ghana. Last year the city opened a new footbridge over a very busy road near my school, and the whole area was very happy기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 about it. I hear시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “heard” the news first on the radio in my uncle Kofi’s shop, and after that I saw many posts about it on the internet. The mayor say시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “said” that the old bridge had been closed for years after the damage, and the builders finished the new one in six months. A lot of residents had signed a petition for it, and some schoolchildren were at the opening with their teachers. The opening was short, but a band played music and many people took photos on the new bridge. The traders who sell fruit near the road were also happy, because more people now walk past their tables. I think people were very interested because the bridge is make동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “made” life easier. Before that, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, children had to cross the road with the cars and it was very dangerous기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and the other way was a long walk. Now people saves주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “save” about thirty minutes every day. Also, many people was주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “were” waiting for this news for a long time, so it was not only a bridge for them. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, for a week everybody was talking about it at home and in the market.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a piece of local news from my city, Kumasi, in Ghana. Last year the city opened a new footbridge over a very busy road near my school, and the whole neighbourhood was delighted. I first heard the news on the radio in my uncle Kofi’s shop, and after that I saw a lot of posts about it online. The mayor announced that the old bridge had been closed for years after it was damaged, and the builders finished the new one in just six months. Many residents had signed a petition for it, and some schoolchildren attended the opening with their teachers. The ceremony was short, but a band played and many people took photos on the new bridge. The traders who sell fruit beside the road were pleased too, because more people now walk past their stalls. I think people were so interested because it made a real difference to daily life자연스러운 콜로케이션. Before that, children had to cross the road between the cars, which was dangerous enough for make동사 구문 오류: 올바른 형태는 “enough to make” 또는 “so dangerous that it made” parents anxious, and the alternative was a long walk. Now people save about thirty minutes a day, which matters a lot to students and workers. There was also the feeling that a long-awaited decision had finally been taken정확한 분사를 쓴 수동태, so it meant more than a bridge to them. For a week시간 표현이 마무리 요점을 이야기와 다시 연결함, it was the talk of the town, at home and in the market.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a piece of local news from my city, Kumasi, in Ghana. Last year the city opened a new footbridge over a very busy road near my school, and the whole neighbourhood was delighted. I first heard the news on the radio in my uncle Kofi’s shop, and later I saw a flood of posts about it online. The mayor announced that the old bridge had been closed for years after it was damaged, and the builders completed the new one in just six months. Many residents had signed a petition for it, and some schoolchildren attended the opening with their teachers. The ceremony was brief, but a band played and crowds took photographs on the new bridge. The traders who sell fruit beside the road were pleased too, since far more people now pass their stalls. I think people were so interested because it made a tangible difference to daily life정확하고 자연스러운 콜로케이션. Before that, children had to weave between the cars to cross the road, which was dangerous enough to leave many parents anxious부정사가 붙은 복합 형용사구, and the alternative was a long detour. Now people save about thirty minutes a day. There was also a sense that a long-awaited decision had finally been acted on정확한 분사를 쓴 수동태, so it meant far more than a bridge to them. For a week or so격식을 낮추어 구어체를 유지하는 자연스러운 모호한 시간 표현, it was the talk of the town, at home and in the market.