ব্যান্ড 6, 7 ও 8 স্তরের IELTS problem and solution রচনা

Band 6

Nowadays a lot of young people use screens for most of their leisure time, and they meet their friends in person less than in the past. Some people think this is only a normal change, but I believe it causes real problems. This essay will discuss two of these problems and then suggest some solutions.

Firstlyঅনুচ্ছেদকে ধারণা দিয়ে নয়, অবস্থান দিয়ে জোড়া লাগানো একটি লেবেল, the biggest problem is that young people lose the skill of talking face to face. When they only send messages, they doesn’t learnকর্তা ও ক্রিয়ার অমিল: সঠিক হবে “do not learn” how to start a conversation or how to listen to another person, so they can feel very nervous in real situations like a job interview or the first day in a new class. For example, a student may not know what to say to a new classmate. Secondlyআবার সেই যান্ত্রিক লেবেল, আগের ধারণার সঙ্গে কোনো যোগ নেই, many of them sleep badশব্দের রূপের ভুল: সঠিক হবে “badly” because they look at their phones in bed late at night. This is also a serious problem for them, because tired students cannot study well and they are often in a bad mood.

There are some solutions for these problems. Schools can organise more clubs where students work together, for example a sport club or a music groupপ্রাসঙ্গিক, কিন্তু এটি কেন প্রথম সমস্যার সমাধান করবে তা কিছুই ব্যাখ্যা করে না. In this way students will practise talking with each other and make new friends. This is a good idea because many students like sport and music. Parents also can put a ruleশব্দক্রম ও কলোকেশনের ভুল: সঠিক হবে “Parents can also set a rule” that phones must stay outside the bedroom at night. I think this is easy to do and it will help young people to sleep better.

In conclusion, screens cause many problems for young people, and schools and parents must do something about themউপসংহার শুধু ভূমিকারই পুনরাবৃত্তি, নতুন কিছু যোগ করে না. If they do these things, the problems will be solvepassive-এর রূপের ভুল: সঠিক হবে “will be solved” in the future.

Band 7

Nowadays many young people give most of their leisure time to screens instead of seeing friends in person. Although this is often treated as a harmless change, I believe it creates two real problems, and both can be addressed through schools and families.

The first problem is that young people lose the habit of talking face to face. Someone who communicates mainly through messages has little chance to practise starting a conversation, listening carefully or coping with awkward silencesকম প্রচলিত, স্বাভাবিক কলোকেশন, so ordinary situations such as a job interview or a first day in a new class can feel stressful. The second problem is poor sleep. Many teenagers scroll through their phones in bed, and the bright light and constant notifications make it harder to fall asleep, which then reduces their concentration the following dayrelative clause লেবেল ছাড়াই কারণকে তার ফলের সঙ্গে যুক্ত করে.

Schools can respond to the first problem by organising activities that require students to cooperate in personকোন সমস্যার উত্তর দেওয়া হচ্ছে তার নাম করে, তাই সমাধানটি জবাবের মতো পড়া যায়, for example sports teams, music groups or drama clubs. Because these activities depend on teamwork, students have to speak to each other directlyসমাধানটি কেন প্রথম সমস্যার সঙ্গে মানায় তা ব্যাখ্যা করে, and over time this builds confidence. The second problem is handled more easily at home. If parents agree a rule that phones stay outside bedrooms at night, young people are more likely to fall asleep quicklyconditional গঠন নির্ভুলভাবে ব্যবহৃত, although the rule works only when parents follow it themselves. Together, these two measures address both problems without asking young people to give up their devices entirely.

In conclusion, heavy screen use weakens young people’s conversation skillবহুবচন বাদ পড়েছে: সঠিক হবে “conversation skills” and disturbs their sleepফলের জন্য সুনির্দিষ্ট ক্রিয়া. These problems can be reduced if schools provide group activities and parents set clear limits at night.

Band 8

Young people in many countries now give most of their leisure time to screens rather than to meeting friends in person. This is often dismissed as a generational habit, yet it produces two distinct problems, each of which has a practical remedy that schools and families are well placed to provide.

The first problem is a gradual loss of conversational ability. Messaging allows time to compose every reply, so those who rely on it seldom learn to improvise, to read a pause or to recover from a misunderstandingসাধারণ শব্দের বদলে একটি দক্ষতার জন্য যথাযথ ও সংক্ষিপ্ত প্রকাশ; the difficulty becomes visible only in situations such as job interviews, where nobody can wait for them to type. The effect does not appear overnight, which is why it is easy to overlook. The second problem concerns sleep. Phones kept beside the bed invite late-night browsing, and the resulting fatigue undermines attention in class the next dayফলের জন্য সুনির্দিষ্ট ক্রিয়া ও বিশেষ্য.

Each problem has a remedy that matches itএকটি বাক্যই সংযোজক ছাড়া পাঠককে সমস্যা থেকে সমাধানে নিয়ে যায়. Schools can address the first by making cooperation part of ordinary school life: a team sport or a school orchestra cannot function unless its members speak to one another continuouslyসমাধানের শুধু নাম নয়, কীভাবে কাজ করে তা দেখানো হয়েছে, so conversational confidence is built without being taught as a separate subject. For sleep, a household agreement that devices stay outside bedrooms overnight removes the temptation altogether, and it is most effective when parents follow the same rule, since children copy what they seesubordinate clause ও কারণসহ দীর্ঘ বাক্য, পুরোপুরি নিয়ন্ত্রিত.

Screen-heavy leisure therefore weakens both conversation and restউপসংহার অবস্থানটি নতুন শব্দে বলে এবং তা ওজন করে দেখে. Because schools can restore the first through shared activity and families the second through a simple night-time rule, the harm is real but far from irreversible, and neither remedy asks young people to give up their devices entirely.