Describe a person you know who would like to work in the medical field

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I would like to talk about my cousin Selam, who lives in Addis Ababa in Ethiopia. Our mothers are sisters, so I know herЧак катасы: «have known her» болушу керек all my life, and we wasЭэ менен баяндоочтун ыкташуу катасы: «were» болушу керек together every school holiday when we were small. She wants to become a children’s doctor, a, erТабигый тартынуу белгиси, анча маанилүү эмес толтургуч сөз, paediatrician. Now she studyЧак катасы: «is studying» болушу керек hard for her final school exams because she hopes to go to medical school. On Saturdays she also helps at a small clinic near her house, where she gives out forms and plays with the children in the waiting room. Sometimes I visit her there, and I can see that the children really trust her. She started to think about this career when she was twelve years old. Her little brother Dawit had a high fever and stayed in hospital for one week. Selam sitЧак катасы: «sat» болушу керек next to his bed every afternoon, and she saw a young doctor who talked to Dawit very gently and made him laugh. After that day she told everybody that she will beКыйыр сүйлөөдөгү чак катасы: «would be» болушу керек a doctor like him. I think she wants this career for two reasons. First, she is very good at scienceЖөнөкөй сөз айкашы; Lexical Resource боюнча баллды чектейт, especially biology. Second, she wants to help people, and in my country doctors get big respectТак эмес сөз айкашы (collocation); «a great deal of respect» табигыйыраак. You knowТартынуу белгиси катары колдонулган толтургуч сөз айкашы, she is also very patient personАртикль жок: «a very patient person» болушу керек, so I am sure she will be a good doctor. I am proud of her, and her plan makes me think about my own future, because I do not have a clear idea yet.

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I’d like to talk about my cousin Selam, who lives in Addis Ababa in Ethiopia. Our mothers are sisters, so I’ve known her all my life, and we spent every school holiday together when we were small. She’d like to become a paediatrician, which means a doctor for children. At the moment she’s working hard for her final school exams so that she can apply to medical school«so that» менен максат сүйлөмү так колдонулган. On Saturdays she also helps at a small clinic near her house, where she gives out forms and plays with the children in the waiting room. Sometimes I visit her there, and I can see that the children really trust her. She first started to think about this career when she was twelve. Her little brother Dawit had a high fever and spent a week in hospital, and Selam sat beside his bed every afternoon. She noticed a young doctor who spoke to Dawit very gently and even made him laugh, and from that day she told everybody she was going to be a doctor like heЖак атоочтун септик формасынын катасы: «like him» болушу керек. I think there are two reasons behind her choice. Firstly, she’s gifted at science«very good» дегендин ордуна так сын атооч, biology especially. Secondly, she genuinely wants to help people, and on top of thatТүшүндүрмөнү уюшкан кармаган байланыштыргыч сөз айкашы doctors are highly respected where we live. I’m proud of her, and I’m sure she’ll be a good doctor because she’s remarkably patientТабигый күчөткүч жана так сын атооч, even with difficult people. Her plan also makes me think about my own future, because I don’t have such a clear idea yet.

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I’d like to talk about my cousin Selam, who lives in Addis Ababa in Ethiopia. Our mothers are sisters, so I’ve known her all my life, and we spent every school holiday together as children. She hopes to become a paediatrician, and she’s currently working hard for her final school exams so that she can apply to medical school. On Saturdays she also helps at a small clinic near her house, where she gives out forms and plays with the children in the waiting room. Whenever I visit her there, it’s obvious that the children trust her. The idea first took hold when she was about twelveБаштапкы учурду киргизүүнүн идиомалык жолу. Her little brother Dawit had a high fever and spent a week in hospital, and Selam sat beside his bed every afternoon. She noticed a young doctor who spoke to Dawit very gently and even made him laugh, and from that day she told everybody she was going to be a doctor like him. I think there are two reasons behind her choice. For one thing, she has a real gift for science«is good at» дегендин ордуна табигый сөз айкашы (collocation), biology in particular. For another, she genuinely wants to help people, children above all, and, as a bonus, doctors are highly respected where we live. I’m proud of her, and I’m convinced she’ll be a caring doctor, because she’s remarkably patient, even with people who are difficultКийинки модификатор сөз айкашы так жана ийкемдүү аяктоо берет. Honestly, her certainty makes me reflect on my own future, since I haven’t settled on a direction yet.