Describe a person who works for a successful company

الدرجة 6

I would like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I know her sinceخطأ في الزمن وحرف الجر، والصواب «have known her for» five years, and in the morning we often take the same metro, so we have a lot of time to chat. She tells me about her day, so I know a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that makes and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her job is, erعلامة تردد طبيعية، وحشو بسيط, to plan the days when the workers come, to talk to the customers and to make sure the teams hasخطأ في التوافق بين الفاعل والفعل، والصواب «have» all the materials. She likes it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company is not very old. Two engineers started it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and now it has offices in four cities. I think the company is successful for three reasons. First, it is very reliableعبارة بسيطة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية, because the workers finish the job on the day they promise. Second, the customers are happy, so they tell their friends and the company gets many new customersعبارة مبهمة، وعبارة «a growing customer base» أدق. Third, the company teaches its employees new things, so people staysخطأ في التوافق بين الفاعل والفعل، والصواب «stay» there for many years. Marta told me that last year the company openخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «opened» an office in the south of the country. You knowعبارة حشو مستخدمة علامةً على التردد, I admire her because she works hard but she is never stressخطأ في صيغة الكلمة، والصواب «stressed». Maybe one day I will work for a company like this.

الدرجة 7

I’d like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I’ve known her for about five years, and we often take the same metro in the morning, so we have plenty of time to chat. She often tells me about her day, so I know quite a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that makes and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her job is to plan the days when the installation teams visit, to liaise withفعل مركب دقيق خاص بمجال العمل customers and to make sure everyone has the materials they need. She enjoys it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company isn’t very old: two engineers founded it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and it now has offices in four cities. I think it’s successful for three reasons. Firstly, it’s dependableصفة دقيقة بدلًا من «very reliable», because the teams finish the job on the day they promise. Secondly, customers are so satisfied that they recommend it to their friendsجملة نتيجة بأداة «so … that» مستخدمة بدقة, which brings in new work. Thirdly, the company invests in training its employees, so people tend to stay for many years. Marta told me that last year it opened a new office in the south of the country, which wereخطأ في التوافق بين الفاعل والفعل، والصواب «which was» quite a big step. On the wholeأداة ربط تمهّد للخلاصة, I admire her because she works hard yet never seems stressed, and I can imagine myself working for a company like that one day.

الدرجة 8

I’d like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I’ve known her for about five years, and since we often take the same metro in the morning, we’ve had plenty of chances to chat. She often tells me about her day, so I know quite a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that designs and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her role is to schedule the installation teams, keep customers informed and make sure everyone has the materials they need. She enjoys it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company isn’t old: two engineers founded it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and it now has offices in four cities. I’d say it owes its success to three things. First, it’s thoroughly dependableأداة تشديد دقيقة مع صفة: the teams finish the job on the day they promise. Second, satisfied customers recommend it to their friends, which keeps new work coming inجملة موصولة تعود على فكرة كاملة، مستخدمة بدقة. Third, the company invests in training its employees, so staff tend to stay for yearsصياغة طبيعية وموجزة. Marta told me that last year it opened an office in the south of the country, a step that would have seemed risky ten years agoبنية فعل مساعد في الماضي تضيف مقارنة مرنة. Overall, I admire her because she works hard yet never seems stressed, and I could easily picture myself working for a company like that one day.