Describe a person who works for a successful company

Band 6

I would like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I know her since시제와 전치사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “have known her for” five years, and in the morning we often take the same metro, so we have a lot of time to chat. She tells me about her day, so I know a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that makes and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her job is, er자연스러운 머뭇거림 표지, 가벼운 군말, to plan the days when the workers come, to talk to the customers and to make sure the teams has주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “have” all the materials. She likes it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company is not very old. Two engineers started it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and now it has offices in four cities. I think the company is successful for three reasons. First, it is very reliable기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, because the workers finish the job on the day they promise. Second, the customers are happy, so they tell their friends and the company gets many new customers모호한 표현: “a growing customer base”가 더 정확함. Third, the company teaches its employees new things, so people stays주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “stay” there for many years. Marta told me that last year the company open시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “opened” an office in the south of the country. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, I admire her because she works hard but she is never stress단어 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “stressed”. Maybe one day I will work for a company like this.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I’ve known her for about five years, and we often take the same metro in the morning, so we have plenty of time to chat. She often tells me about her day, so I know quite a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that makes and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her job is to plan the days when the installation teams visit, to liaise with업무와 관련된 정확한 구동사 customers and to make sure everyone has the materials they need. She enjoys it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company isn’t very old: two engineers founded it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and it now has offices in four cities. I think it’s successful for three reasons. Firstly, it’s dependable“very reliable”을 대신하는 정확한 형용사, because the teams finish the job on the day they promise. Secondly, customers are so satisfied that they recommend it to their friends“so … that” 결과절을 정확하게 사용, which brings in new work. Thirdly, the company invests in training its employees, so people tend to stay for many years. Marta told me that last year it opened a new office in the south of the country, which were주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “which was” quite a big step. On the whole요약을 이끄는 담화 표지, I admire her because she works hard yet never seems stressed, and I can imagine myself working for a company like that one day.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about my neighbour Marta, who lives in the flat below mine in Porto, in Portugal. I’ve known her for about five years, and since we often take the same metro in the morning, we’ve had plenty of chances to chat. She often tells me about her day, so I know quite a lot about her work. She works as a project coordinator for a company that designs and installs solar panels for houses and schools. Her role is to schedule the installation teams, keep customers informed and make sure everyone has the materials they need. She enjoys it most when a school switches on its new panels and the children are excited. The company isn’t old: two engineers founded it about fifteen years ago in a small workshop in Braga, and it now has offices in four cities. I’d say it owes its success to three things. First, it’s thoroughly dependable정확한 강조어와 형용사: the teams finish the job on the day they promise. Second, satisfied customers recommend it to their friends, which keeps new work coming in문장 전체를 받는 관계절을 정확하게 사용. Third, the company invests in training its employees, so staff tend to stay for years자연스럽고 간결한 표현. Marta told me that last year it opened an office in the south of the country, a step that would have seemed risky ten years ago과거 조동사 구문이 유연한 비교를 더함. Overall, I admire her because she works hard yet never seems stressed, and I could easily picture myself working for a company like that one day.