Describe a short journey you often take but dislike

Band 6

I would like to talk about a short journey that I often take but I dislike. It is the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It is only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I am doing時態錯誤：應為「do」 it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at this time every microbus is very full基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drive主詞動詞不一致：應為「drives」 very fast, and then he stops suddenly, so much people可數名詞用法錯誤：應為「many people」 fall on each other. There is also a big junction near the bridge where the cars never move, so we wait there for a long time說法含糊，限制了Lexical Resource的分數 every day. I can not read or even to use詞形錯誤：應為「even use」 my phone, because there is no space, and sometimes I, er猶豫時使用的填充詞, feel sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but the music and the horns are too loud, so I cannot follow anything. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and it takes longer, so I came back to the microbus. I dislike this journey mainly because it makes me tired before the day starts, and also because it is very bad基本說法，限制了Lexical Resource的分數 to never know how long it will take. You know當作停頓使用的填充詞, I hope I can find a flat near the university next year.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a short journey I often make but really dislike. It’s the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roof生動的詞語搭配，形容非常擁擠的交通工具, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes suddenly, so passengers fall to each others詞形錯誤：應為「fall into each other」. There’s also a big junction near the bridge where the cars hardly move, so we sit there for ages口語但自然的說法，形容等了很久 every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel a bit sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I go back時態錯誤：應為「went back」 to the microbus. What I dislike most is that the journey tires me out before the day has even started正確使用分裂句來強調, and I never know exactly how long it will take. I’m hoping to find a flat near the university next year.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a short journey I make several times a week and really dislike: the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roof, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes without warning, so passengers topple into one another精準的動詞片語，描述突然的晃動. There’s also a big junction near the bridge, a real bottleneck where the cars barely move, so we sit there for ages every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel slightly sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I went back to the microbus. What bothers me most is that the journey wears me out before the day has even begun, and that I can never tell how long it will take分裂句中包含兩個並列的that子句，用法準確. Honestly, I’m counting the months until道地、有彈性的說法，表達期望 I can find a flat near the university.