Describe a short journey you often take but dislike

Band 6

I would like to talk about a short journey that I often take but I dislike. It is the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It is only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I am doingШақ қатесі: «do» болуы керек it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at this time every microbus is very fullҚарапайым тіркес; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and driveҚиыспау қатесі: «drives» болуы керек very fast, and then he stops suddenly, so much peopleСанауға болатын зат есім қатесі: «many people» болуы керек fall on each other. There is also a big junction near the bridge where the cars never move, so we wait there for a long timeБұлыңғыр тіркес; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді every day. I can not read or even to useФорма қатесі: «even use» болуы керек my phone, because there is no space, and sometimes I, erКідірісті білдіретін толтырғыш сөз, feel sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but the music and the horns are too loud, so I cannot follow anything. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and it takes longer, so I came back to the microbus. I dislike this journey mainly because it makes me tired before the day starts, and also because it is very badҚарапайым тіркес; Lexical Resource критерийін шектейді to never know how long it will take. You knowКідіріс белгісі ретінде қолданылған толтырғыш сөз, I hope I can find a flat near the university next year.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a short journey I often make but really dislike. It’s the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roofТығыз көлікке арналған бейнелі коллокация, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes suddenly, so passengers fall to each othersФорма қатесі: «fall into each other» болуы керек. There’s also a big junction near the bridge where the cars hardly move, so we sit there for agesҰзақ күтуге арналған бейресми, табиғи тіркес every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel a bit sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I go backШақ қатесі: «went back» болуы керек to the microbus. What I dislike most is that the journey tires me out before the day has even startedЕкпін үшін cleft sentence дұрыс қолданылған, and I never know exactly how long it will take. I’m hoping to find a flat near the university next year.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a short journey I make several times a week and really dislike: the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roof, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes without warning, so passengers topple into one anotherКенет қозғалысқа арналған дәл етістік тіркесі. There’s also a big junction near the bridge, a real bottleneck where the cars barely move, so we sit there for ages every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel slightly sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I went back to the microbus. What bothers me most is that the journey wears me out before the day has even begun, and that I can never tell how long it will takeCleft sentence ішіндегі екі параллель that-clause дәл қолданылған. Honestly, I’m counting the months untilҮмітті білдірудің идиомалық, икемді тәсілі I can find a flat near the university.