Describe a short journey you often take but dislike

Band 6

I would like to talk about a short journey that I often take but I dislike. It is the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It is only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I am doing시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “do” it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at this time every microbus is very full기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drive주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “drives” very fast, and then he stops suddenly, so much people가산·불가산 명사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “many people” fall on each other. There is also a big junction near the bridge where the cars never move, so we wait there for a long time모호한 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 every day. I can not read or even to use형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “even use” my phone, because there is no space, and sometimes I, er머뭇거림을 나타내는 군말, feel sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but the music and the horns are too loud, so I cannot follow anything. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and it takes longer, so I came back to the microbus. I dislike this journey mainly because it makes me tired before the day starts, and also because it is very bad기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 to never know how long it will take. You know머뭇거림 표지로 쓰인 군말, I hope I can find a flat near the university next year.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a short journey I often make but really dislike. It’s the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roof매우 붐비는 차량을 나타내는 생생한 콜로케이션, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes suddenly, so passengers fall to each others형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “fall into each other”. There’s also a big junction near the bridge where the cars hardly move, so we sit there for ages오랜 기다림을 나타내는 구어적이지만 자연스러운 표현 every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel a bit sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I go back시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “went back” to the microbus. What I dislike most is that the journey tires me out before the day has even started강조를 위해 정확하게 쓴 분열문, and I never know exactly how long it will take. I’m hoping to find a flat near the university next year.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a short journey I make several times a week and really dislike: the microbus ride from my home in Nasr City to my university in the centre of Cairo. It takes only about twenty-five minutes when the road is clear, but I do it five days a week, usually at half past seven in the morning, because my first lecture starts at nine. The problem is that at that time every microbus is packed to the roof, and I often have to stand with my bag between my knees. The driver plays loud music and drives far too fast, then brakes without warning, so passengers topple into one another갑작스러운 움직임을 나타내는 정확한 동사구. There’s also a big junction near the bridge, a real bottleneck where the cars barely move, so we sit there for ages every single day. I can’t read or even use my phone, because there’s no room, and sometimes I feel slightly sick. I usually put my earphones in and try to listen to a podcast, but between the music and the horns I can’t follow a single sentence. I tried the metro once, but it needs two changes and takes longer, so I went back to the microbus. What bothers me most is that the journey wears me out before the day has even begun, and that I can never tell how long it will take분열문 안에서 두 개의 병렬 that절을 정확하게 사용. Honestly, I’m counting the months until희망을 나타내는 관용적이고 융통성 있는 표현 I can find a flat near the university.