Describe a book that made you happy

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I’d like to talk about a novel that made me happy. It is about a retired postman who decideОшибка времени: должно быть «decides» to write short letters to the people in his village to encourage them. I’m from Recife, and a friend lendОшибка времени: должно быть «lent» me the book last year when I was, erЗаминка в поисках следующей мысли, very stressed about my exams. She said it was a nice story and that it could help me relax. In the beginning I didn’t expectedОшибка формы глагола: должно быть «didn’t expect» much, but after the first chapter I was interested and I can’tОшибка времени: должно быть «couldn’t» stop reading. I finished it in four days, mostly in the nightОшибка в предлоге: должно быть «at night». Every chapter is about a different neighbour, and I was very excitedПростая фраза; ограничивает Lexical Resource to see how the letter changed his or her life. My favourite neighbour is an old man who replyОшибка согласования: должно быть «replies» with a recipe, not a thank you, and that scene is very funnyПростая фраза; ограничивает Lexical Resource. The ending was a surprise, because at the end the postman receiveОшибка согласования: должно быть «receives» a letter, too. I laughОшибка времени: должно быть «laughed» on the bus when I read one of the funny parts, and people looked at me. The book made me happy because it showed me that a small kind action can be very importantРасплывчатая фраза; ограничивает Lexical Resource for another person. After I finished it, I started to write short notes to my friends, you knowФраза-паразит, используемая как заминка, and they were happy to receivedОшибка формы глагола: должно быть «receive» them. I think it is a good bookПростая фраза; ограничивает Lexical Resource for everybody, and I want to read it again in the future.

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I’d like to talk about a novel that made me happy. It’s about a retired postman who decides to write short letters to the people in his village to encourage them. I’m from Recife, and a friend lent me the book last year when I was under a lot of pressureЕстественное сочетание слов для стресса because of my exams. She said it was a lovely story and that it might help me relax. At first I didn’t expect much, but after the first chapter I couldn’t put it downИдиоматичный фразовый глагол с правильным модальным глаголом и временем. I finished it in four days, mostly at night. Every chapter follows a different neighbour, and I was dying to find outНеформальная, но точная идиома сильного любопытства how each letter would change his or her life. My favourite neighbour is a grumpy old man who replies with a recipe instead of a thank-you, and that scene is hilarious. I read that part twice because I wanted to enjoy it again. The ending was a surprise, because in the last pages the postman receives a letter himself. I laughed out loud on the bus at one of the funny scenes, and people stared at me. The book made me happy because it showed me that a small act of kindness can mean a great deal to someone. After I finished it, I started writing short notes to my friends, and they were happy to receivedОшибка формы глагола: должно быть «happy to receive» them. I think it’s a book what everybodyОшибка в относительном местоимении: должно быть «a book that everybody» should read, and I’d like to read it again one day.

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I’d like to talk about a novel that made me happy. It’s about a retired postman who decides to write short letters of encouragement to the people in his village. I’m from Recife, and a friend lent me the book last year when I was under a lot of pressureЕстественное сочетание слов для стресса because of my exams. She said it was a lovely story and that it might help me relax. At first I didn’t expect much, but after the first chapter I couldn’t put it downИдиоматичный фразовый глагол с правильным модальным глаголом и временем. I finished it in four days, mostly at night. Every chapter follows a different neighbour, and I was dying to find outНеформальная, но точная идиома сильного любопытства how each letter would change his or her life. My favourite neighbour is a grumpy old man who replies with a recipe instead of a thank-you, and that scene tickled me no endИдиоматичное выражение веселья. I read that part twice, simply to enjoy it again. The ending was a surprise, because in the last pages the postman receives a letter himself. One funny scene had me laughing out loud on the bus, to the bewilderment of the other passengers. What made the book so uplifting was how it showed that a small act of kindness can mean a great deal to someoneРасщеплённое предложение, чётко связывающее книгу с чувством. After I finished it, I started writing short notes to my friends, who were touched and a little surprisedТочная пара прилагательных, описывающая реакцию. I think it’s a book that almost anyone would enjoyВзвешенное, естественное заключение без преувеличения, and I’d like to read it again one day.