Describe a new law you would like to see introduced

Band 6

I would like to talk about a law that I want in my country: everybody who ride주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “rides” an electric scooter must wear a helmet and use the cycle lanes. The idea come시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “came” to me last spring, when a man on a scooter without helmet went across the road near my university and almost hit a bus. He was okay, but I can not stop시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “could not stop” thinking that it could be much worse. In my city these scooters are very popular기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 for students and delivery riders, but the rules are not er자연스러운 머뭇거림, 거슬리지 않는 군말 ready for this. The law would apply for riders of every age and also for the companies that give the scooters, because they must give helmets and explain the rules at the beginning. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. I think it is good기본적인 형용사, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 for the country, because fewer accidents means less problems수 일치와 가산명사 오류: 올바른 형태는 “fewer accidents mean fewer problems” for hospitals, and a small change like this can protect“would” 누락: 올바른 형태는 “would protect” a lot of people, especially students, who ride very fast near the university gates.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a law I’d introduce in my country: a rule that everyone riding an electric scooter must wear a helmet and keep to the cycle lanes. The idea came to me last spring, when a rider with no helmet swerved across the road outside my university and narrowly missed a bus정확하고 자연스러운 콜로케이션. He was fine, but I couldn’t stop thinking about how easily it could have gone the other way. In my city these scooters have become very popular in a couple of years, mostly among students and delivery riders, and the rules haven’t really caught up with them관용적인 구동사와 현재완료. The law would apply to riders of every age and to the companies that provide the scooters, who would have comply“to” 누락: 올바른 형태는 “have to comply” with it by giving out helmets and explaining the rules. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. I think it would benefit the whole country“explain” 줄에 답하는 분명한 의견 표지, because fewer accidents mean less pressure on hospitals, and it’s a small change that could protect many people.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a law I’d introduce in my country: a rule that everyone riding an electric scooter must wear a helmet and keep to the cycle lanes. The idea came to me last spring, when a rider with no helmet swerved across the road outside my university and narrowly missed a bus. He was fine, but I couldn’t stop thinking about how easily it could have gone the other way. In my city these scooters have become hugely popular in just a couple of years, mostly among students and delivery riders, and the rules haven’t really caught up. The law would apply to riders of every age and to the companies that provide the scooters, who would have to give out helmets and explain the rules when someone first uses one. The government should also run a short campaign before the law starts, so that people hear about it first. It would benefit the whole country, not only the riders이익을 분명하게 밝히는 대조 구조, because fewer accidents mean less pressure on hospitals and fewer drivers who have to live with a near miss. Frankly, it’s a small change that would protect a lot of people자연스럽고 자신감 있는 마무리 문장.