Describe a special cake you ate or made

Band 6

I would like to talk about a lemon cake with poppy seeds that my mother bake시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “baked” for my graduation in July 2023. It is not normal for her, because she is a very good cook, but she cook주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “cooks” only meat and rice and I never see시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “saw” her make a cake in my life. After, I know동사 선택 오류: 올바른 표현은 “found out” that she tried three times in the last two weeks and the first cake was very black기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 on the bottom. We ate it in our garden in the afternoon with my aunt, two cousins and my grandfather, and we was주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “we were” sitting at a table under the apricot tree. She put some thin pieces of lemon on top and a few mint leaves from the pot near the kitchen door. Honestly개인적인 의견을 여는 자연스러운 담화 표지, the cake was a little dry, but nobody said anything, and I remember she was very happy기본적인 표현, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함 when she brought it. It was special for me because of her effort and her nervous face, and on a day with many congratulations she wanted to say it in her own way.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a lemon and poppy-seed cake that my mother baked for my graduation in July 2023. It isn’t something she would normally do: she’s an excellent cook, but she makes savoury food, and I’d never seen her bake a cake in my whole life. I found out afterwards that she’d practised three times in the previous fortnight and that the first attempt had come out almost black on the bottom. We ate it in our garden that afternoon, with my aunt, my two cousins and my grandfather gathered around a table under the apricot tree자연스럽고 생생한 콜로케이션, and she’d decorate동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “decorated” it with thin slices of lemon and a few mint leaves. To be honest, the cake was slightly dry, but nobody mentioned it, and I can still picture how proud she looked when she brought it out. It was special because it wasn’t really about the taste이유를 이끄는 대조 구조 but about the effort and nerves behind it, and I think, on a day full of congratulations자연스러운 명사구, she wanted to say it her own way.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a lemon and poppy-seed cake that my mother baked for my graduation in July 2023. It isn’t something she’d normally do: she’s an excellent cook, but her talent is for savoury food, and in all my life I’d never seen her bake a cake. I found out afterwards that she’d practised three times in the previous fortnight and that the first attempt had come out almost black on the bottom. We ate it in our garden that afternoon, with my aunt, my two cousins and my grandfather gathered around a table under the apricot tree, and she’d decorated it with thin slices of lemon and a few mint leaves. Honestly, the cake was slightly dry, but nobody mentioned it, and I can still picture how proud she looked when she brought it out. What made it special wasn’t the taste at all but the effort and the nerves behind it대조가 분명한 분열문, and, on a day full of congratulations, she’d chosen to say it in a way that was entirely her own.