Describe a time you got up early

Band 6

I would like to talk about a morning last May when I get upПомилка в часі: має бути «got up» at half past three to see the sunrise from a hill near Chimgan, in the mountains outside Tashkent. It was the idea of my younger brother Bobur, and he talkПомилка в часі: має бути «had talked» about it for many weeks, so in the end I said yes, although I am not a morning person. We putПомилка у виборі слова: має бути «set» two alarms, took sandwiches and tea, and a friend with a car came at four. It was very dark and very coldПрості повтори; обмежують Lexical Resource when we started to walk, and in the first half an hour I was regretПомилка у формі слова: має бути «regretting» або «I regretted» my answer. But on the top the sky becomeПомилка в часі: має бути «became» orange behind the mountains and there was fog in the valley, erПриродна пауза, незначне слово-паразит it was a really niceПросте формулювання; обмежує Lexical Resource view. We sat there for one hour and almost did not talk. On the way down we had breakfast in a small tea house, and Bobur said many times that he was right. I was tired all afternoon, but I think it was worth it, and I would do it again.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a morning last May when I got up at half past three to watch the sunrise from a ridge near Chimgan, in the mountains outside Tashkent. It was my younger brother Bobur’s idea. He’d talked about it for weeks, until I finally agreed, although I’m not a morning person at all. We set two alarms, packed sandwiches and a flask of tea, and a friend with a car picked us up at four. It was pitch dark and bitterly coldТочний, образний опис when we started the climb, and for the first half hour I regretted saying yes. But when we reached the ridge, the sky was turning orange behind the peaksPast Continuous задає тло розповіді, and the valley below was still full of mist. We sat there for almost an hour, hardly speaking. On the way down we had breakfast in a small tea house, and Bobur kept reminding me that he’d been right all along. Looking back, I think it was completely worth itДискурсивний маркер роздуму відповідає на рядок «and explain»: I was tireПомилка у формі слова: має бути «tired» all afternoon, but I’d seen something I’d never have seen from my bed, and I’d gladly do it again.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a morning last May when I got up at half past three to watch the sunrise from a ridge near Chimgan, in the mountains outside Tashkent. It was my younger brother Bobur’s idea. He’d seen photographs of the view and had talked about it for weeks, until I finally agreed, although I’m definitely not a morning person. We set two alarms, packed sandwiches and a flask of tea, and a friend with a car picked us up at four. It was pitch dark and bitterly cold when we started the climb, and for the first half hour I honestly regretted saying yes. But when we reached the ridge, the sky was turning orange behind the peaks and the valley below was still full of mist. We sat there for almost an hour, hardly speaking. On the way down we had breakfast in a small tea house, and Bobur kept reminding me that he’d been right all along. Looking back, it was absolutely worth itПочаток-роздум прямо відповідає на рядок «and explain»: I was tired all afternoon, but I’d seen something I’d never have seen from my bed, and I’d happily do it again, preferably with a thicker jacketЛегкий гумор і природний стиль.