Describe a city you have been to and would like to visit again

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I want to talk about Istanbul, a city I visited in March 2023 with my cousin Aziza. We stayed there for five days and we visitОшибка времени: должно быть «visited» many places, but the thing I remember best is the ferry across the Bosphorus. It wereОшибка согласования подлежащего и сказуемого: должно быть «It was» a very nice trip, with birds behind the boat and old mosques on the big skylineПростое прилагательное; ограничивает Lexical Resource. We also went to the Galata area and climbed the tower in the evening, and we eatОшибка времени: должно быть «ate» simit in the street almost every day. But there is one thing we did not see, the Basilica Cistern, because the queue was too long and our flight isОшибка времени: должно быть «was» early the next morning. I also want seeПропущено «to»: должно быть «want to see» the Princes’ Islands, which we erЕстественная заминка, некритичное слово-паразит did not have time for. So I would like to go back in autumn, when there are fewer people. The city is very interestingПростое прилагательное; ограничивает Lexical Resource and I think I only saw a small part of it, so I hope I can visit again one day, maybe with my family, because I think they would enjoy it as much as I did.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about Istanbul, which I visited in March 2023 with my cousin Aziza. We spent five days there and packed in a lot of sightseeing, but what I remember best is crossing the Bosphorus on the commuter ferry, with gulls following the boat and the skyline of old mosques sliding slowly pastЯркое, точное глагольное выражение. We also wandered around the Galata district, climbed the tower at dusk and ate simit on the pavement almost every day, which became a small ritual for the two of us. There was one thing we missed, though: the Basilica Cistern, because the queue was far longer than we’d expectedСравнительная конструкция с высказанным ожиданием and our flight left early the next morning. We also didn’t hadОшибка формы глагола: должно быть «didn’t have» time for the Princes’ Islands. That’s really why I’d like to go backСвязка, вводящая объяснение, ideally in autumn, when the city is quieter. It feels steeped in historyЕстественное, точное словосочетание, and I came home with the impression that I’d only scratched the surface, so I’m already thinking about a second trip, and this time I’d keep a whole day for the islands and another one just for wandering without a plan.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about Istanbul, which I visited in March 2023 with my cousin Aziza, and which I’m hoping to see again within a couple of years. We spent five days there and packed in a great deal, yet what I remember best is simply crossing the Bosphorus on the commuter ferry, with gulls trailing the boat and the skyline of old mosques sliding slowly past. We wandered around the Galata district, climbed the tower at dusk and ate simit on the pavement more often than I’d care to admit, which became a small ritual for the two of us. What we somehow missed was the Basilica CisternРасщеплённое предложение даёт естественный акцент, because the queue was far longer than we’d expected and our flight left early the next morning, and we ran out of time for the Princes’ Islands too. That unfinished business is a large part of why I’d like to return, ideally in autumn, when the city is quieter. It feels like a place where centuries are layered on top of one anotherИдиоматичная, образная формулировка, and I came home convinced that I’d only scratched the surface, so I’m already planning a second trip, with a whole day set aside for the islands and another for wandering without an itinerary.