Describe a plan you had to change

الدرجة 6

I would like to talk about a plan I have to changeخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «had to change» last April, a picnic by the Charvak reservoir on Saturday with six classmates from my course. We organiseخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «had been organising» it for two weeks and everybody had a job, and I was in charge of the wayكلمة غير دقيقة، و«route» أدق and the transport. We agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast sayخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «forecast said» heavy rain for all weekend, and the road to the lake is very muddy, so we knew the plan was not goodصياغة بسيطة، وهذا يحدّ من درجة الثروة اللغوية. We wrote many messages, and then we decideخطأ عابر في الزمن، والصواب «decided» not to cancel and to go to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We took the food that we prepared, and Timur’s mother gave us two board games. Honestlyأداة ربط طبيعية تمهد لتعليق شخصي, I was disappointed first, because I worked hard for this plan and I wanted the lake, but at the end I enjoyed it more, because we played to late evening and nobody was afraid about the road. I learned that a good day is about people and not about the place.

الدرجة 7

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can getsخطأ في صيغة الفعل، والصواب «can get» very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan had fallen throughفعل مركب طبيعي لوصف خطة أخفقت. After a lot of messages, we decided to move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room, instead of calling the whole day offاستخدام دقيق لعبارة «Instead of» متبوعة بصيغة «ing». We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expectedأداة ربط تأملية تجيب عن سطر «explain»: we played until late and nobody had to worry about getting home in the dark. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people more than the place.

الدرجة 8

I’d like to talk about a plan I had to change last April: a Saturday picnic by the Charvak reservoir with six classmates from my course. We’d been organising it for a fortnight, everyone had a job, I was in charge of the route and transport, and we’d agreed to leave at eight in the morning. But on Friday night the forecast changed to heavy rain for the whole weekend, and the road to the lake can get very muddy, so it quickly became clear that the original plan wasn’t sensible. After a lot of messages, we decided that, instead of calling it off, we’d move everything to my friend Timur’s house, which has a big living room. We brought the food we’d already prepared, and Timur’s mother lent us two board games. In the end, I enjoyed it more than I’d expectedأداة ربط تأملية تجيب عن سطر «explain»: we played until late, nobody had to worry about getting home before dark, and we talked more than we would have outdoorsحذف طبيعي في جملة شرطية. I was disappointed at first, but it taught me that a good day depends on the people far more than on the place.