Describe a special day out that did not cost much

Band 6

I want to talk about a day out I have시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “had” last June with my two friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams, and we was주어와 동사의 수 불일치: 올바른 형태는 “were” very tired, so we decided to go to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We did not plan much. In the morning we packed our own lunch, bread and fruit and some boiled eggs, and we took the local bus. When we arrived, we walked around the lake, which took about one hour, and the view was really nice기본적인 어휘, Lexical Resource 점수를 제한함. The place was not famous, so there were not many people there. After that we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for a long time. The water was cold but Timur jump시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “jumped” in anyway, and we laugh시제 오류: 올바른 형태는 “laughed” so much. I think this day was special because it was very simple and calm. We did not look at our phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I felt that the time was stopped수동태 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “time had stopped”. After a hard month it was exactly what I needed, and now I try to do something like this every summer.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggs세 가지를 분명하게 나열한 동사구 and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtaking강하고 정확한 형용사. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so it was almost empty. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway, and we all laughing동사 형태 오류: 올바른 형태는 “laughed” 또는 “were laughing” so much. What made the day special was how unhurried it felt답변의 초점을 분명히 하는 분열문: nobody looked at their phones, we just talked about our plans and our future, and I lost track of time자연스러운 관용 표현. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about a day out I had last June with two close friends, Aziza and Timur. It was just after our exams and we were all exhausted, so we decided to head to a lake in the hills, about two hours away by bus. We didn’t plan much: in the morning we packed a simple lunch of bread, fruit and boiled eggs and caught the local bus. When we arrived we walked around the lake, which took about an hour, and the scenery was breathtaking. The spot was a little off the beaten track, so we almost had it to ourselves. Afterwards we sat on the grass, ate our lunch and played cards for ages. The water was freezing, but Timur jumped in anyway and we all laughed until our sides hurt. What made the day special was how unhurried it felt답변의 초점을 분명히 하는 분열문: nobody looked at their phones, we simply talked about our plans, and I lost track of time completely. After such a stressful month it was exactly what I needed, a genuine breath of fresh air정확하게 쓰인 관용 표현, and I now try to repeat something similar every summer.