Describe something you do that saves you time

Band 6

I would like to talk about something I do every Sunday in Monterrey, where I live: I cook my meals for the whole week. I start at about three o’clock in the afternoon and I stay in the kitchen since two hoursПомилка в прийменнику: має бути «for about two hours». I make rice, chicken, beans and some vegetables, and then I put everything in boxes in the fridge. I wash and cut the vegetables first, so the cooking goНеузгодженість підмета й присудка: має бути «goes» faster, and I listen to music while I work. During the week I work in an office and I finish late, so before I started this habit I was buyПомилка у формі дієслова: має бути «used to buy» або «was buying» food on the way home almost every day. Now I just take a box, heat it and eat. On a normal weekday this saves me about one hour, which is a lot when I arrive home at seven and I am very tired. It helps me because I do not need to cook after work, so I have more timeБазова лексика; обмежує Lexical Resource in the evening to relax or watchingПомилка паралельності: має бути «watch», щоб відповідати «relax» a series. You knowСлово-паразит як маркер вагання, it also saveНеузгодженість підмета й присудка: має бути «saves» money, but the main reason is the time. When I do it I feel very goodБазове прикметникове слово; «relieved» або «in control» дало б вищий бал, because I know the week is already erПриродна пауза вагання, незначне слово-паразит planned, and I do not worry about dinner. My colleagues ask me sometimes how I stay so calm, and I tell them it is only my Sunday routine. I think it is a simple habit but it changed my life.

Band 7

I’d like to talk about something I do every Sunday in Monterrey, where I live: I cook my meals for the whole week. I start at about three o’clock in the afternoon and spend roughly two hours in the kitchen. I make rice, chicken, beans and some vegetables, and then I put everything into boxes in the fridge. I wash and cut the vegetables first so the cooking goes faster, and I listen to a podcast while I work, which makes the time pass quickly. During the week I work in an office and finish late, so before I started this habit I used to buyingПомилка у формі дієслова: має бути «used to buy» food on the way home almost every day. Now I simply take a box, heat it and eat. On a normal weekday that saves me about an hour, which matters when I get home at seven, exhausted. It helps me because I don’t have to cook after work, so I have a couple of extra hoursПриродна, конкретна фраза in the evening to relax or watch a series. It also saves money, but the real benefit is the timeЧіткий наголос на головній причині. When I do it I feel relievedТочний вибір прикметникового слова, because I know the week is already planned and I don’t have to worry about what to eatПравильний інфінітив і wh-підрядне речення. My colleagues sometimes ask how I stay so calm, and I tell them it’s just my Sunday routine. It’s a simple habit, but it has honestly changed my routine.

Band 8

I’d like to talk about something I do every Sunday in Monterrey, where I live: I cook my meals for the whole week. I start at about three in the afternoon and spend roughly two hours in the kitchen, making rice, chicken, beans and some vegetables, which then go into boxes in the fridge. I chop the vegetables first so that everything cooks in parallel, and I put a podcast on, which makes the two hours fly by. I work in an office and often finish late, so before I started this habit I used to buy food on the way home almost every day. Now I simply take a box, heat it and eat. On a normal weekday that saves me roughly an hour, which matters a great deal when I get home at seven, exhausted. It helps me because I no longer have to cook after work, which frees up a couple of hoursТочне фразове дієслово, вжите природно in the evening to relax or watch a series. It also saves money, but the real benefit is the time, not the savingsПротиставлення, збудоване збалансованою іменниковою групою. When I do it I feel relieved, almost as if a weight has been liftedІдіоматичний вислів почуття, вжитий правильно, because I know the week is already taken care of and I won’t have to think about dinner againПриродне гнучке посилання на майбутнє з правильним заперечним модальним дієсловом until the following Sunday. Colleagues sometimes ask how I stay so calm, and I tell them it’s simply my Sunday routine. It’s a small habit, but it has quietly changed the shape of my whole routine.